Not bad. Kind of funny, and the truth.
Punch trees, build, and have all your hopes and dreams destroyed by creepers. The effort seems low so that's why it's only a 3
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Not bad. Kind of funny, and the truth.
Punch trees, build, and have all your hopes and dreams destroyed by creepers. The effort seems low so that's why it's only a 3
sorry the flash version's resolution is kinda bad. rather watch the avi ;)
Adult rating is straight porn. Since you censored, and just had some fuzzy balls, you can put this as mature dude. You'll get more views and not disappoint the people trying to get their fap on. Everything else is the same as my comment on your last post:
Work on the audio. It's rough hearing the bass of your breathing.
This was very funny. The story, the tone of it, everything. Short, wholesome, and a goofy twist. The bad art even works for it.
My only suggestion for improvement would be the recording quality. Watch some youtube tutorials for mixing audio and giving it a more clear sound, and add atmosphere behind it if you want that effect. Give that sweet voice the quality it deserves. (Followed and about to watch your second one now)
The physics to the controls are a little unintuitive. Like running on ice. After falling from tall rocks, I noticed falling is very slow, as if you're underwater. The audio kept breaking up.
After the initial plant spot that looked pretty obvious, it took me some time to figure out the rocks had holes for planting. Even a simple paragraph box for instructions should be added to any game. Help the player know what they're supposed to do to enjoy it.
This isn't terrible. It's cute. The music is calming, which fits the theme, and I like the idea of livening up a desert. Seems like a great game that's EXTREMELY early in development, and 48 hours seems about right. Keep this up, with more time and effort invested in this or future games and I think you could make something wonderful.
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